Hmmm, thats my name in real name japanese, why don't you just name her Kinomi, which also means just a berry' or Hiberi, (Hee, Bah Ree) which is fire berry, or Kajiberi, or Kakiberi, all means the same of fire berry. It fits her name right? i suppose. just giving hints. i see your trying hard, but, the reason your coloring is getting mushed togehter is because, thats not inkign is it? thats just black colored pencil or carcol. INK ^-^ it makes it look way neater. YOU HAVE GOOD COLORING, no doubt about that. Ya just need to work on bodies, and faces, Truth be, she is a mew, and when antros' are given ears, there more realstic and furry like ^^. and also cover up the spot where her human ears should be, she looks..bald..right there. thats sorta not good. ^^ cause i know she isn't. Keep Working on it. ^-^ Look at some anime books, for propotions and such. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up ^^