this is really good! it looks awesome!

Eyes looks amazing, I think everything is just fine. =]

thanks for the feedback. CobwebDreams, i have always had that problem. lol i draw fat heads!

I think the shading is great, and the hand is fine too. Great job!

-LeGasp!- Tis awesome! I like you shading and how it doesn't smudge the picture all over. and for pencil no being smeared or uber sketchy is fantastic! but for criticism, I would suggest making the shoulders a little widder on account of the head's size :] great job! -Farrell