Hi LMD umm this ..this is fairly good .Of all I would say its the best and I want to encourage ur work.Well lets see the idea is just original I like what u did.The sword probablly would go better with that size a little more close to the front.The girl siluete is good it need more shape and detail with shadows shape and light.The head maybe its a little tiny :P .Lemme go and try to make an example and lets see what comes but nice one.U also need more owrk with the clouds and the efect of light on them.The clouds near the sun dont look very gassy they are kinda more like spageti :P .The other one is way better.Gona go and try to make a pic example maybe it helps.The sword also didnt came straing but looks nice. Angel~

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