Let me see ummm u need to work on proportions the body seems to short.The face is to pinti and long and It need detail.I sugest u start with close up pictures so u then take cre of proportions.The factions need to be more fine and more worked.The face dosnt show the femenine caracteristics .Make a close up view and if u want I help u with that.Just send a mail to me and if u want animistic or real . Angel~

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