...that line is really annoying. BUT Aside from that. Very cute coloring, in the close up of the picture, the clothes are starting to lose there line, so its making it seem very messy. ^^ try not go go over the lines when coloring. it dosn't look right going over the line. ^^ sorta like coloring outsdie the line, when in a coloring book. He looks ADORABLE. there is proportion that lacks. ^^ his arms seem like noodles sorta not good. i like how you colored his face. and the chibis are good. ^^. Lookit some books to help you with proportion. ^^ Squee! Good job. I know she'll love it. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up Live it, Love It, Learn it. ^-^