I like it but here's one suggestion... make the arms and hands a little bigger. because in real like your hand is almost the size of half your face in manga it's a bit smaller but not by a lot. Don't worry i'm not good at hands either. You don't have to change anything if you don't want to this was just some instructive critism.

WOW!!! REALLY PRETTY!! I can't believe it! XD Great job on it!! You have GOT to post more drawings!

Good job!! The wings are freakin awesome!!