Mna dont change anything in that pic! Its perfect! well I cant wait for your manga to come out!

Ooh, i like it. i luv those colors, and the sword is so kool! but, if you really want advice? i think that the bottom layer of the colar of the shirt should be covered up, or not patterned. that will also make it easier to draw, as well. luve this. luvs, AllE K.

cool coloring! I like the pistion of the chara too, very good job!