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    AngelBest Dream

    Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/13/07 | Reply

    Hmmm the pic is really nice and cute.Maybe the face looks a little weird since the line is not something constant.The eyes look great but the hair seems like could use more shading and less lines.Nice work keep ti up. Angel

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    niltac

    Otakuite++ | Posted 05/11/07 | Reply

    it is very cute i love the way you drew it

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    DarkShadowAngel14

    Otakuite | Posted 05/11/07 | Reply

    Well you did a great job! I think you could improve on the jaw a little.It looks a little uneven when it meets with the chin. Other than that I can't really see anything wrong with it.You draw hands nicely btw ^_^ -Dark♥

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    katami

    Senior Otaku+ | Posted 05/11/07 | Reply

    my only sugestion would be that you focus more on the way that hair would flow and don't be afraid to go dark where shadows are supposed to be. other than that i really like this pic^_^ good job! ~later

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    Black Dragon99

    Otakuite++ | Posted 05/11/07 | Reply

    this is a really cute pic I just had to add as one of my fav pics^_^ ^�^ ^_^ Keep up the good work.

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    ookamirox

    Senior Otaku | Posted 05/10/07 | Reply

    its really cute! but the eyes and just the person in general look too much like my OC Ookami Keiko. o and Hinita is spelled Hinata. so yea but i thik ur coloring is really good ^^ and the pic is really cute!!! ^^ korewa hontoni kawaii des-ne! ~Ookami-san!!!