Well.. it's a good start to a piece... but you need to fix up some others. As said before, if you were going for a 'real' look instead of 'chibi', you need to proportion out your characters a little better. The hair could use just a little more detail, along with other things in this picture. Remember- the light shines on the eyes, so more than likely, they will have those white spots you see. Going hand in hand with this, there wasn't any shading at all. This drawing could have been 100 x times better if you had utilized the shadows for your benefit. Lastly, the shoes- The girl's shoes seem to be like hooves. Bring them out a little more- same for the guys.
Keep practicing! You'll get it eventually! ^_-
Zexy guy!! Hee hee.
Yes, i must agree with Angelbest dream. I think the legs need a be a tab bit longer ont he boy, but otherwise, i love the outfits and expressions and piercings and hair and and and YAY.
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Hmmm the posture of the girl is great its just so well made evil .I like how it slowly turns :P .I liked the turn but the arm looks like it was pasted dont know.
The guy looks a little chibi dont know if u wanted that but is great work.
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