dude this is the bestest fallen angel i have ever seen i just love them so much!!!! i just love the shadin and the poem makes it better gosh....im jealous of ur goodyness
Awesome! And I mean both the picture and the poem. The poem really completed the picture. I really love how you did her shadow, it just makes it look awesome. Great job! *gives comment cookie*
~Fang
Aaawww! Her expression is so heart wrenching. Awesome job on the shading! I was never all that good at shading. Great job on the lighting effect too. *votes*
Creative. LOVE how you did the shadings and I especially like her wings. Neat. I like how you did the "light-effect" too. Beautiful poem and you just made that up? You're very talented, dear Katami. I like it a lot. =]
This is a gorgeous pic! I love the texture and the shading a lot. ^^d
Her expression's so sad... it almost made me teary-eyed. I rarely do that, so kudos to you!
The shadows look really good too! Don't worry 'bout the hands and feet so much. ^^ I thought it was your style until I read through the comments.
The poem fit with this pic. ^^ It lacked a continuous meter, and the rhyming pattern changed very often--just something to watch out for, for next time. Other than that, I truly loved it! (sorry, I write poetry myself-so I wanted to help a little...) You got your message through, and that's ultimately what counts. :3 Everything else is just icing on the cake.
Sorry for rambling, great job on the pic!!
*briar rose90*
to wowie:
i edited the lighting affects and tried to re-upload the pic and it worked!! is this better?
ps-i really do appreciate everyones comments and criticism. i wouldn't be where i am now without it!
That was a beautiful poem ! When i first started reading I was like "Wow, what a good writer" Ends up it was you ! Quoting you werent a poet, PSH, well you should become one ^_^ I'd buy a copy of your book !
Ok enough bout that, the picture works SO well with the poem, I love how you shaded [Although I think the transition from the light shining down to the dark area's in the corners could have been a lil more faded]
Oh and the bleeding wings and teary eyes was perfect !
Just love it, looking forward to even more awesome art from you ! ^_^
Tanuke
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I love how you drew the wings!
The shading is also very good and I like how you wrote a poem to go along with it
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