hehe, thanks for the con crit!

constructive criticism time: ok so heres the deal, her face is ok, but you should touch it up. the side of her face is kinda curvy and that's not how anime is. unless that's you style, its ok. also her ear is too small and needs to be enlarged a little. i think her jawline goes back too far. also her shoulders and...boobs...sorry! her shoulders needs to come down more and no ladies arm comes before her boob. i know mine doesn't. XD sorry for the weirdness. but yea... also her back is a little out of shape. i don't know how to explain it, but it is. but work on the coloring a little bit and everything else is ok! *hugs*

hi there! ok, you asked for constructive crtcism, so here we go: - the coloring is good, although you should think a bit of the way the things your chara wears her clothes, so make sure the light reflexes like it should be. you can start with objects near you (like pencils, fruits, whatever) and then observing people and look how the light gets reflected. - anatomy: this one�s pretty tough; you really get used to it after some time of drawing. The best thing to improve your way to draw poeple or better said, they�re body, is to observe other poeple. Just look at them and only try to draw them. With the time you get used to the proportions (even good mangaka have sometimes problem with proportion, so just don�t think your the only one ^-^) so, hope this can be of some help for you. at the beginning it�s really a thing of observing...you can also take manga or anime and observe there...it may be easier than observing real people (Since they move and won�t sit still lol). ~imasyon