This is really cute! but ok. i dont think ANYONE is telling you how to improve because i see you do the same stuff. please take my tips into consideraton and not as a flame. i want to help you get better because, it seems you arn't your just standing on a stright line and not moving newhere. Your coloring is REALLY NICE. keep that. ^-^ you can improve that but your coloring is really good. seeing as how you use paint. dont say i can't do nothing because of paint, ive saw BEAUTIFUL drawings on paint so if they can do it you can do it!! have confidence in yourself! her eyes are VERY NICE, its her head..that is creepy. slim it down. to a normal sized head. like if you look at an anime it should show you what there suppose to look like. along with, her not having ears, or bangs, so it sorta looks like shes bald there. im only thing to help, if you think this is a flame XD well, theres nothing i can say to you but it isn't. ^0^ i really do like the eyes but use some helping books also. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up! Live it, Learn it, Love it! ^^!