Not a bad picture in any respect. =)
However, work on your shading a little more. In some parts it is a little too heavy (such as the face), and others could use a little more (such as the green in the background.) Also, your hair is a tad out of proportion. Just watch how you draw your layers a little more carefully.
Now, onto the good. I do like your choice of color. Everything matches in accordance to one another, and that is a good start. Secondly, I really do like your style of drawing. Very unique and eye-catching.
Keep drawing!
Astrael Rose
Otakuite | Posted 06/14/07 | Reply
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Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/13/07 | Reply