It's a good drawing. Especially since you chose one of the harder views/panels to draw. However, there are some flaws. Kasumi's right arm shoudn't be there. The biggest reason being that her arm doesn't bend that way, especially considering its length. Technically speaking. her right arm is incredibly longer than her left. Kasumi's fingers are also the wrong lengths and too boney. Their heads are also a little messed up. Kasumi's head is either (a) too short, or (b) having an odd shape. Kyoji's head is also at an unnatural angle. But, as I said, this is a harder view. And, sorry, I'm one for constructive criticism. And I'm kinda good at spotting errors since I'm good at looking at something, making it 3-d in my mind, and able to turn it at all angles without looking distorted. (Wierd, huh?) But as I said, good work! ^_^

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