ok its ok ...but lemme suggest some few things ...i can see you didnt draw his outfit so well ..try to remember the costume of your character very well before drawing it ...well unless you actully wanted him to be dressing like that ,another thing ..i can also see you didnt master the body drawing very well here is my advice ...first start training on the facial expressions then once you master it go for the whole face once you master it go the neck and the chest ..until you master the whole body ..got it but other then that its beautiful and train more and i know you did your best on it =^_^=