I really lover the background and color of the piece. The scenery is brilliant. However, her hand holding the envelope is a bit unrealistic because of the split. Also, I think the legs don't really match with the torso... Thw two legs seem so far apart from each other when they meet with the bottom of the torso, and also, I think the legs are too high up as well. As another said, one leg is so big compared to the other~
Other than that, it's very great. The face, background, umbrella, shading, and details, are so brilliant.
Your drawing is really amazing, the position is well down and the coloring is original...and also the background...is nice, but still I look one leg a little thicker...mmm maybe I shpuld put on my glasses...hehehe see ya.
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