There's still room for improvement, but just keep trying and getting better, that's all there is to it, right? ^^ As for the critiques... InsaneAndroid has already provided that for you :P
This looks pretty good, but could've looked better if you put in more effort though. Good try and keep improving :)
Well...it�s kind of hard to see the complete detail of how you colored the picture due to the quality of this Lavi, ha ha.
But, I can still see how your lines are very sloppy. Try coloring more slowly and in different rotations to avoid the sharpness. Especially in thick hair like his.
His face looks very nice. However the arms and his hand, again with the sketchy lines. Other than that, everything looks great! Then again I can�t really view the true quality of the picture...ha ha.
+Insane+
Traditional Artist (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/15/07 | Reply
Hey this is very awesome...I love your colouring...Im sorry but i cant give you any tips becuase i stink at colouring....LOL i only colour for 2 months now if it is that long..LOL...Votes
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Traditional Artist (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/15/07 | Reply
Good things comes 2 those who wait, The things you lost will always replace something better..