I agree with Gothy-chan. Also, if you could somehow darken your lines or sharpen the contrast your details would be more visible and help a little bit. Her hands are a little small, and the way the book sits in them seems a little awkward to me. But this is still a great picture :D I like it as well.
HelenaValentine
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Awesome drawing. Your style is interesting, but in a good way. I like the pose, and expression on her face. She looks content.
I also like how you added the cats, it makes the picture cute..well cutER.
But a small word of advice (sorry I'm not trying to sound rude ^^'), would be to darken the cusion she's sitting on, and clean up the background a little.
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