Great job! The forshortening on her arm looks a bit off, but apart from that it's really great. Always nice to see Winry fanart :D And I find 3 days very impressive.

Overall, AWESOME. 3 things I noticed: - Hands. Like everyone else said, reaching forward, hand bigger. - Feet. To me the toes are a bit too separated (almost froggy like, and maybe the non-big toes can be a little skinnier?) - Her left boob. It seems a little smaller than the right one (even though it's the closer one to the camera view) and maybe up higher than it should be with that pose. The shoulders seem to be pretty evenly posed, so I think the boobies should be too. Anyway, aside from all that. I really love the picture. Hands and feet have ALWAYS been hard for me, so that's pretty good. The shading is great, especially on the thighs and the blue reflection. Good job and keep at it. You'll do great :)

omg, you make her look hot when shes really not! (that rymed and i can't spell!) awesome job

yeah, i SO like the colouring and anatomy. you're sure good at it! but maybe her hands look a but too small... but everything else SO ROCKS! Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati

Another solid piece. Your work continues to dazzle as it improves. Grif

Oh! She has such a pretty belly! I like this. Very nice coloring.

Very very pretty! The coloring is amazing and the pose is hot. Nice job. ^_^

flawless work, i cant believe you did it that quickily, you are inspirational

I think you've mastered that style already, this is amazing! ^^ The coloring (as many have said) is perfect! Awesome job!

This is perfection! just like all the other ones you've done! the background is simple and winry is detailed, so it evens out! can't wait to see what you do next! ^^

This is amazing! I love your whole anime-mixed-with-realism style! It is totally unique, and absolutely amazing! Winry looks so good here! You are very talented when it comes to anatomy, something that is very difficult for most people. Great job ^_^! *Votes and Favorites* ^_^ -SuperSaiyanJounin

epp i love tis picc!! but i think winry's hands look at biy weird... but who am i to talk?.. i can't even draws hands T^T~ ne love it

Really good Colors, I wish I could do as much with colors. Really great job on proportions and details, I've seen many types of realist manga style and I hope you can make one of your own.

Aww you made Winry look so pretty ! I really heart how you colour the skin, I'm sure you'll perfect the anime/realism style very soon, maybe add more detail to the hair ? Oh and I really like how you have the blue highlight on her skin, looks awesome Keep submitting the awesome art ! ^__^