oh how cool! it's good for a first attempt!!! you have the same problem i do it looks like. (really shaky lines) hmm.. don't really konw how to fix that though. i suggest working on coloring and your pictures will look a lot better ^_^
I like this alot, but you should really try working on your coloring. You pretty much have the lineart down...but yeah. Just try to color in one solid direction, and then once you have that certain area colored nicely try coloring in the other direction. Trust me it'll come out pretty good.
Also you might want to try to clean up your lines before submitting anything, more people tend to look at your work the cleaner it is.I really do like this though. You made Naruto look pretty kool, and I can tell you tried really hard on this. Your quite a good artist.^^ Have a good day!!
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