WELL! ;D i congrats you on the following things. You didn't make her the LONG LOST, SISTER of AN UCHIHA DX! She dosn't have a spirit withen her that makes her a ripoff of naruto/gaara Shes a pretty good oc. DX i would of shot you, if she was a rip-off but. she seems ok to me. I LIKE HER. and your a newbie ;D! and thats a good thing to start off with, not a rip-off DX! Hmm i'll draw her sometime! when i get a chance. There's alot you have to work on, ive noticed in your coloring, you color DARK, THEN GET LIGHTER, THEN LIGHTER, AND THEN. it disapers. that's a werid way of coloring, and it leaves alot of stuff out, to not yet be defined yet. so try coloring all of it. and looking at how to color, and draw turitols! ^-^! and you should get better. I KNOW, you can make her outfit more NINJAY! the only thing that definds her as a ninja is her headband. Spiff up her outfit! ^-^! Naruto outfits are sorta modern, but there not COMPLIACTED like kingdom hearts 2 designs. if this was a little normal, her feet would get cut off. cause her legs, are a little to short. BUT YEAH. i differenly think you can do a better job in Hika's outfit. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up Live it, Learn it, love it ^^