I think you can do better with her. Right now, her hair looks like a rip-off of inuyasha and that sorta isn't right. try your best to make an OUTFIT/HAIRSTYLE all your own. And it seems shes another dog demon? Her marks are pretty alright. but you should really make her oringal as oringal as you can. You dont have to make your charaters the same demons. she can be a cat demon but she cant be with inuyasha DX! tha'll just be crazy. there are alot of demons! besides, Dog. Snake demons,LOTS! be creative. Her upper body looks a little b it werid, consering her boobs. there down to much, so it looks all...werid..move them up a little ^^ and you should be fine. Shes pretty cute~! please take what i said into consideration. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never give up Live it, learn it, love it ^^