its really awesome and i hope you don't hold this against me or anything b/c its probably all just in my head but when i first looked at, all that kept popping into my head was harry potter, i really have no idea.

woah, dude thats tight!! umm no one says tight nemore, but it is!! you shade excellent, as far as critiquing goes, hand is drawn good, just a little small, like papawaffle said, and don't take it badly!! cuz i love the pic!! >^.^< great job1!

i like this one but i'm going to have to critique it a lil...you should draw your hands bigger! there still to small! i'm only trying to help you get better... criticizing pictures will help you because it points out what you need to improve on and get better....don't take it the wrong way. ; )

Like the magic� The power� The outfits� Cool! ~.~

*le gasp* WOW!! this is SO AWSOME! your good with pencil shading, yeah... and nice pose! idea in general ROCKS! ^-^ Akatsuki Elite Member: Ichati

nyaa cool drawing with pencil!! i've learned it too, at last!! i like your art, it has very good shading and emotions in it... :))) *vote*

Whoa, this is awesome Angek-chan! I love the depth as well the proportion! It definetyly stands out amongst your other pieces. I want to see this colored though. Spreading the infection. Homsar88.