I like the use of a brown color in your lines, but it does make her eyes seem to stick out in a bad way. Though I love her hair, shirt, and the shading, I think the eyes really hurt the picture. The far away eye is larger than the one closer to us, which makes it feel unbalanced. Then, they are just SLIGHTLY too far apart, I think.
I love the picture. But, I think if you can fix the eyes slightly, she'll look even better.
I'm sorry if this is a bit harsh. Because I think you did great with the rest of the picture. However, because the lines are brown, your eyes go right to her eyes, which seem a bit off, which makes the whole picture seem a bit off.
Just increasing the size of the eye on our right should help, I think.
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