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    Silent Fury

    Otakuite | Posted 09/01/07 | Reply

    The things I see have already been mentioned about the arm and the neck, but also, I think that the chest is a little wide. That's all about getting the angle exactly precisely right, which definitely takes practice. I admire your tediousness.

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    playitbakinslomo

    Replay~ (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 09/01/07 | Reply

    wow!! I really love the concept and her clothes! The shading is amazing too! Keep up the fantastic work! ^^

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    Dutchican

    Otakuite+ | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    oh man!! way COOL!!! =D shading is Awesome!! ;D it does look like it took a while.... but anyways, GREAT JOB!!! =)

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    Kazumaz

    Otakuite | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    wow i like the sahding on this nice pencil work. the feathers are a nice addition too. xox

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    isoko

    Otakuite | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    great job! i love how the feathers surround her.^^ *votes*

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    WinterChild

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    Haha I like the title "Peacock Lady" XD Her feathers look kinda strange though no offence

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    Burning Silver

    Grand Otaku | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    Hey. Very nice. Critique: Her face is a bit to high up and short. Other than that; GREAT! ^^V Beautiful job on the feathers, and elegant dress. Keep 'em comin'!>< TTYL ~Silver~

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    XxI wuv PockyxX

    Otaku Legend | Posted 08/31/07 | Reply

    Awesum pic^-^! Kool details and nice shading:]! The only thing i can crit is that she's a bit too skinny and her arm's a bit too thick. Love the pic :D