Well i'm glad you INKED before you colored. your coloring skills arn't that bad either but work on them some more. and don't rush when coloring, take it easy. Her eyes are cute, if this is shojo or just normal, if its serious then its fine if it was shojo yeah they'd be a little bigger. her mouth looks good. her other eye thou, is druping. Tips when inking: You have this ruff jagged edge on this picture. before you ink make sure you have a steady hand first. then began to ink. either you wigged to much or, you dont really no how to ink. you want to be fast but good when inking cause, if you stay to long on one spot, it'll bleed. so. Her face is a little long, so make it smaller. Her waist is, and her lower body is way to small. even if the shorts are tight, it still wouldnt be that small cept for the shorts themself. Lower her bangs a bit too, unless it was intental. her pig tails look ok, but you could lower them a bit. Take your time when inking~ thats aways a must. I hope these tips helped you. Don't take what i said out of contex that bugs the shit outta me. Your manga seemes pretty cool. you should grab some more, skills before you do your manga~ Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up Live it, learn it, love it ^^