Wow the shading is awsome! As youve been told like 25 times haha ^^ I love all the detail, I like shading with graphite sketching sticks theyre great for shading =D Awsome job!
This looks like it's done with a HB pencil rather than a mechanical one @_@ (mechanical pencils hardly look this smooth) Nevertheless, I really admire the shading here :D This must have taken ages to do, since the tone looks so perfect! x) And you draw mountains so well, lol.
What Fokkusu said is true, but I do understand that drawing someone facing the front is extremely difficult to pull off, because everything must be symmetrical. I tried it before, and it took long hours of constant editing and redrawing to get it right -_-
Great effort on this pic ^^ It looks fantastic the way it is.
***Note that this is not a personal attack, simply critique. Critique is one of the few ways an artist can better themselves, a concept few Otaku seem able to grasp.***
Hinata appears very asymmetrical. Her left eye (on my side) is much further off to the side than the right, and slightly higher. Her shoulders are also not the same length away from her neck, and her elbows seem to be reversed or at an odd angle.
Exquisite shading. I love the background's detail. Keep it up and strive for improvement!
This is AMAZING! The shading is Fantastic! Great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great job! (I typed all of the greats to emphasis it too!)
OMFG!!!! this is soo good!!! it's great!!!! wow im jealous. amazing backround for one thing. u gave it a 3D effect and that is pretty skillful. my mountains look like triangles. -_-'
i like how clean it is. it has no smudges that i can see and with mechanical pencil, that would be pretty difficult. though i never tried before. i don't have nearly enough skill for something like that like u do. u got her eyes just right. shy and sweet. i like that. i've never seen something so well drawn with only a mechanical pencil. it has a bit of depth to it and that makes it more interesting. nice work and keep it up!!
i voted already. later.
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