o.o Your. Inking is still jagged. She looks like a villaness. It also looks like, her underwear is over top of her shorts?.... Narrow her neck a littl e more. The pose is good. i never tried it. but yeah. you didn't fix the jagged lines. when inking. it. ruins the picture. So yeah. work on that. you can see every mistake when you have ragged, inking. Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never give Up Live it, learn it, love it ^^