the only reason it doesn't look like her is maybe your not used to drawing that style (? i dunno) but it's still cool anyways! ^_^

Awesome!

Its good! We'll just pretend she's younger or something. Or her shirt's big! YAY! ^.^ You are a really great artist!

she looks good. kinda young tho

Well, you have better ones, this isnt the best but it isnt also bad!! Oh, Its me, Nizna from MT - found you!! You have the best draws I ever seen!!!

great. =^_^=

nice,u did everything just fine,but to be honest,kinda work on the facial part a little more,othe than that u did a awsome job!

I agree with everyone else, but this beats the hell out of any of the attempts Tom made at drawing her, the one my khaki shorts will haunt me forever, ewwwwwwww,

As allways, your lining is unbeleieveable. The only improvment that can be made would be how you did the proportions and facial style.

you did fine, i agree with amaki-chii thugh, proportion cud use some work, but other than that you did great! keep it up!