Hey, Alex! Yet another great picture! yeah, I'll admit it's the first time I've done more than just glance through your art, lol. Yet more subtle details, like the rocks on the ground, the various folds in the clothing, even in the third one, and the cracks in the walls. Maybe a few too many cracks, but not TOO bad... Love the jacket, and the other clothes are pretty awesome, too. The eye. It reminds me of the Hyuuga's eyes. By that, I'm referring to the one-color pupil-less aspects. If you ever go further with your story idea, it would probably be pretty good as a story, and not just as a manga, too. Let me know, and I can either type it or proof it for you. Proofing: One of my many talents. :P Umm... I think I pointed out everything... Oh, wait... I know your drawing style seems to be tall and thin, but here, it seems to be not as over-the-top. I dunno about everyone else, but I'm not the biggest fan of 6'3", 128-lb. characters. I'll admit that not all are bad, but I'd rather see ones that seem to be a little more... Substantial, maybe? Overall, I'd have to say one of your better works. :P Also, I need to think up a work to commission from you. :)

Whoah, gorgeous GORGEOUS marker picture O_O!! I love all the detail in it, and your style of drawing and coloring with markers rules so much TT! Especially the black and white hoodie thing...OMG I love it *_*!

What a nice group shot! If you ever go further with this manga idea I would read it!