Thanks! ^_^
Yeah I really do need to fix my scanner :/
and I copied the expression a pic I found on the internet, I don't know what it is but it looked funny ^_^
Meh, Kokkoii-chan already said what I was going to say, so I'll just make some comments on the major things.
You really should try to fix your scanner or work on the colors. there's something odd going on here...Her hair is dark pink, not peachy-orangish....
And those are horns, not cat or fox ears, like Kokoii-san said.
You're doing better, but you do need to work on where you place her shoulders. They look kinda small and droopy.
Try searching for some online tutorials or art books to look at for refrence. It will help you when you're trying to get the proportions right.
Anyawy, again, good luck!
*Votes!*
~Potato-chan!
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At this point i really can't tell at all, if its your scanner or your coloring.
You should work on your coloring, my scanner never killed it that badly. so. yeah work on that.
Her neck is really not right.
I have problems with shoulders ^o^ so, give them a roundness to them.
She looks, no offense, but her expression is retarted looking. Move her right eye over. and hmmm. what expression are you giving off to nana? scared? if its suprise or scared. you need to fix her eye brows to give that off, and fix her mouth.
I love ELFIN Lied.
You made her ears look like CAT ears, instead of horns, lets not forget that. ^o^
found her face a little more.
Yeah tutorials would really help you out there with faces and bodies, and stuff. ^o^
It seems your switching eye styles based on the anime, choose an anime eye style you like, and keep on using it.
Also, her hair is really good but, you want more hair on her head, thats to little hair, its like she's bald.
Keep trying. You'll get it when you try hard enough.
Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give up
Live it, Learn it, Love it
^o^
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