Good, I like the back view of Zares. Only problem is his neck. There's like I don't know what it is that should be there to show he's turning his head around. I think it's a muscle or somethin. Other than that the whole thing is amazing. And I am lead to guess this is a part of your story for which my mind has filled in the missing blanks and came up with the weirdest scenerio possible XD I killz serious scenes. XP

Sage of Magic