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    Hyper Mew26

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply

    your getting better. instead of spicking the hair up, curve it down. (did i word that right?) but keep drawing!

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    kitty405179

    Otakuite | Posted 12/02/07 | Reply

    its really good but try not to make ichigo so flat chested. Otherwise, good job!!

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    Forever Gone

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/21/07 | Reply

    It's really cute!! >w< A few proportion issues,the heads a tad big,but nothing that can't be fixed. ^-^ Keep up the good work~~ ♥

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    Otakuite | Posted 11/21/07 | Reply

    Thanks! xD Yepp it is from volume #1 of the manga, that's where I copied it from ^_^ Haha, oops! I thought he was called Asuma on the anime but Masaya Aoyama on the manga? Oh well ^o^ I must have got it wrong xP

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    potato u princess

    Otaku Legend | Posted 11/20/07 | Reply

    You're doing pretty well with the angles of their heads here. Isn't this a scene from volume #1 of the manga where she acidentally falls on him and they end up kissing? DANG! She's lucky! I wanna be that accurate when I fall! XD Anyway, it looks good, but Ichigo/zoey's face is a tiny bit squashed-looking. You need to make it look a little longer (But no wider, it's fine with that!) It's good that you're using Ichigo's Japanese name, but who the heck is Asuma?! His name is actually Masaya Aoyama! Ah, well. I had trouble spelling the names when I just started, too.