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    coolcat676

    Otakuite | Posted 11/23/07 | Reply

    u need to work on her arms and her middle chest and stomach area. I like ur hair though!! Remember, don't give up!

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    zoeyhanson

    Otakuite | Posted 11/21/07 | Reply

    Thanks! You're actually the first person on here to be nice about my drawings ^^

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 11/20/07 | Reply

    You're doing well! Her hair looks nice and you got her face perfectly! The turtleneck she's wearing seems to look good. It looks like you know how to draw her shoulders pretty accurately, too! :) Okay, now for the other part of my little critique thing... It seems that you have a pretty good grasp on her head and torso...but her arms and legs look a bit odd. I suggest you make them a little onger and taper them where her elbows and/or knees show up. Also, you got the hands the right size! When I started, I couldn't do that...I envy you! The only thing you mightwant to fix is the fact that it looks a bit like she has no wrists. You need to make her hands seperate from her arms a bit more, and vary the length of her fingers. You also might want to make her waist curvier, and make sure her feet are facing the same way as the rest of her body. Good work so far! ^^ If you need anything, like a web tutorial or some art book rcomendations, I'm the person to call! PM me, if you want any help! ~Potato-chan!