Well I think your attempt was a success! Very nice work! The only thing I can find wrong is her eyelids are uneven and the linework on her headband and hair-bun-thing is wobbly. But I'm guilty for both of those things in alot of my art, so don't feel bad. ^^
Keep up the good work!
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