wishmakerz

Otakuite++ | Posted 12/13/07 | Reply

I'm sorry to say this, but the arms are huge! And it's facing the wrong direction. See? That little curve you gave for the elbows look like it's inside out, which means the palms of the hands should be facing the outside. The face needs to be made bigger otherwise it looks weird. Other than those few points, it's okay :D ~Keep wishing~

Kiichigo-Chan

Otakuite | Posted 12/08/07 | Reply

This looks pretty good, except for a few proportion issues. Like already mentioned, The arms are just a Little too big for the body. The head is a little too small, or the body is too long (I think the width is fine). I really like the way you colored the picture! The weapon design is nice, although the hand doesn't really look like it's "holding" it if you know what I mean. Violet's overall design is pretty good ^^ Good Job! ~Kiichigo

coolcat676

Otakuite | Posted 12/06/07 | Reply

HER ARMS R HUUUUUGE!!! also some1 cannot hold something like that... Well i like the shirt and the bow. I just noticed something! Ur bow only has 1 strand cmin off it! I like how u did those things on the arms (dunno wat they r called) and also the stick of the wepon is cool! Her hair and her tail are to mixed in! Wow aint I vsounden rude?! Well i like it but im just nicken away at somethings small and big. her head is to small 4 her big body... Well it still ok! keep a tryin on her! you will get her perfect soon!

potato u princess

Otaku Legend | Posted 12/06/07 | Reply

Well, the others said mostly what I was going to say, but I do have a few suggestions... I think her weapon is pretty well designed, nut it doesn't really have anything for the attack to shoot out of. Maybe you could add a crystal or something like that on the end with the ribbon (kind like Berry's staff). That way, it might make a little more sense. Also, Her head seems a little too small for the rest of her body. Either that or her body is too big for her head... Anyway, Nice Job!! You did very well designing her outfit, and I like hoe you drew the energy/light glowing around her weapon! =^-^=

Minto

Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/06/07 | Reply

Contrary to what vivid dreams said, I think it would make more sense to have them the same color. For instance, if a cat has orange fur, it's ears aren't going to be black. (though that would be pretty awesome, haha.) That's kinda why I don't get mew ichigo's ears/tail/hair. Sha. Hmmm. I really like the straps on her top, but... usually mews over 10 have strapless tops. Atleast, that's how it seems in the manga/anime. I still doesn't really get the two-tailed thing, but hey, it's your mew. =P Oh! You know what? I think her hair would look cute in like.. a really nice hair tie near the bottom of it. Try it and see. I might be wrong =B The face looks really nice. Just make it a wee bit larger. =] Happy winter. ~minto.