I agree with eternal mini moon, on the eyes. Very nice. (: Although I have a different comment to make on the skin coloring. Or actually, just coloring in general. You might want to try coloring in just one direction. It looks smoother, and you might end up with less 'white space'. n_n

I like it its nice,,the only thing I would say to work on is coloring the skin because I can see alittle bit of white space But besides that its really good you made her eyes really good