charr

Otaku Legend | Posted 12/31/07 | Reply

Nice, but for talking I'd use some word bubbles(thats just me though, some people prefer not to use them) Heads are a bit big, but the colors are great and your hands are really good(fingertips are a bit sharp though) most of the things I see with it depend on what style you want to accomplish ^_^ I really like their clothes, interesting yet simple. Words and word bubbles is the only thing I have a problem with really, looks much more proffessional if you type in the words. Thats about it, great picture on the whole though. :]>Charr

ElvesAteMyRamen

Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/31/07 | Reply

Pretty darn good for your first time using a tablet! I think the coloring aspect turned out great! Outlines can be pretty darn tough...especially when using a computer, I'm not sure what program you used to make this but most Photoshops and what-not have a "corrections" pen tool, meaning when you draw a straight line, let's say there's a bump in it, the corrections pen will automatically smooth it out for you. You might want to look into that. Body proportions are veeeery difficult and it all depends on what style you're going for. Even with anime though they tend to make their body shapes quite accurate to how you'd see them in real life...except legs or arms tend to be a little elongated. You should grab yourself a random magazine with people in it and practice re-drawing those models because that will help you learn body shapes.^^ I hope I'm not sounding to tough on you...I just tend to go in detail when someone asks for a more thorough critique.^_^ ~*Elves

Sage of Magic

Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/31/07 | Reply

This is actually pretty good. I mean, this beats out my first tablet experiment. Coloring's fine, only issue is, like you said, proportions. Soril's arm is really really thin where the ribbon wraps around her hand and such. She needs some meat on her XD lawl. And the hands, but everyone (including me) has issues with hands. The way the ribbon hangs in some places can be worked on too. I suggest looking at real stuff (that's what I do ^^) But I love the expressions and coloring. Torso propotions look good. Clothing folds...yup, all good.