i drew this when i was 11. look in my fanart. lol. and i think i should redo it.. ahem anyways..you shouldnt rush like everyone else said. shading takes time.
Ringo and Potato-chan seem to have covered pretty much everything.
All I would suggest is that for you to take your time more. The ears are definitely something you want to work on. The highlights on her hair are a little strange since there is the one the right side of her hair, but not the left.
Your wrinkles look good, but what I find strange is that everything is shaded, except the chocker and the pendant.
It's a good start, but it could be even better! You just have to keep trying!
This is a popular image to draw, no? Anyway Ringo already said most of what I was going to say but here's some more in case you want it!
Her facial expression is very good, and you did the folds of the dress quite well. BUT...her brests look like watermelons compared to the rest of her body. They're way too big if she's hunched over like this. They should be kind of compressed and not covering her arms.
I think you need to find a refrence pic of a girl kneeling, or take a look at the original you were drawing from.
Anyway, your shading is kind of streaky and massy looking. Use a kleenex or a blending stump to even out the color next time, okay?
Good! Now, just keep prcticing! I know you can get better if you try! =D
~Potato-chan!
You Need Work. :/
I Can Tell Very Clearly That Your Were Rushing Just By The Strokes Of Your Pencil. D: Its Not A Race. This Is Something To Do In Your Free Time
When Your Relaxing D:
Not A Race! >W< Thing Is. You Shaded Everywear Therefore The Constast Is Totally Srewed.
Theres Blocking Spots, Were Theres really Dark. You Have Absolutly No Highlights. And Her Ears. Look Like Bunny Ears.
Sorry If I'm Being Brutal. But The More Brutal I Am The Better You'll Be
: D
-Ringo
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