to make him look less like a female (as in, make him look more like a feminine man, and less like a female mascarading as a man), his body should be a little more blocky with less curves. notice the thigh, which curves in the signature feminine way. Males hold fat differently, so his legs would look more like rectangles smoothed out.
gumbygirl
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/16/08 | Reply
i think this would be much better as a girl! but, oh well its cool!
~gumbygirl, a good friend~
caosgoth
CAOS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/11/08 | Reply
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