That thing is friggen cute. I wanna glomp it. Or have it eat me.
AND...since you wanted critisism cuz you said you did I'm gonna try to give the best I can! Yup. Just know I love your art regardless...and that I'm still learning so feel free to disregard my nonsense.
Alright, the wing closest to the viewer looks flat compared to that back one. The back one is extended. The one closest looks like it's pushed against the body. If you want it to look extended (if that's what you want) try foreshortening it a tad. And the shading in the mouth looks slightly rough. You might want to try smoothing it out NOT through rubbing the paper. Or applying any other smoothing utensil. Just try it by adjusting your own pressure. And that is all ^^ *hugs thingy-ma-jigger* I shall name it Sharky. :3
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Otakuite+ | Posted 03/20/08 | Reply
It's adorable.
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Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/15/08 | Reply
That thing is friggen cute. I wanna glomp it. Or have it eat me.
AND...since you wanted critisism cuz you said you did I'm gonna try to give the best I can! Yup. Just know I love your art regardless...and that I'm still learning so feel free to disregard my nonsense.
Alright, the wing closest to the viewer looks flat compared to that back one. The back one is extended. The one closest looks like it's pushed against the body. If you want it to look extended (if that's what you want) try foreshortening it a tad. And the shading in the mouth looks slightly rough. You might want to try smoothing it out NOT through rubbing the paper. Or applying any other smoothing utensil. Just try it by adjusting your own pressure. And that is all ^^ *hugs thingy-ma-jigger* I shall name it Sharky. :3