And thank you for pointing out Kabutos lens. I didn't notice it. e_e;
Mmhmm. You're more than welcome to voice your opinion about my pictures. I never hear what people think could have been done in them so I keep on goin'. x:
Wow, over 200 views. Pretty popular, if you ask me.
I'm gonna have to rate this one higher than your group pic that I just commented, for two reasons.
1. The BG is also great, but it's simpler, and doesn't distract from the main focus as much. It's great though, I love the style on it. :P
2. It's pretty emotional. Not overly emotional, like either "ZOMG, dead/dying peoples!" or "AWWWW... *Puke*" emotional, more of a milder combination of the two.
While I usually like a slightly "blurrier" or more solid-color shading/coloring, this is pretty good.
Both the pose and the clothes are great, and I especially like the bandages, and Kabuto's gloves. Oh, and did you end up working on the headband? I'm thinking that I might just make one in my metal shop, but that means that I'd have to learn a new program, which doesn't seem all that user-friendly...
Anyway, done with that randomness...
The expressions are good, but perhaps Kabuto's face coulda been either shifted down a bit on his head, or his head shaped a little differently... (For some odd reason, it reminds me of Harry's in the later Potter movies...)
And the girl's mouth should probably be a little down more, with the nose a little more protrusive/down.
Kabuto's right lens should also be a bit more see-through, at least a very pale purple coming through, and an eye outline...
The bottom right corner, though... It needs something... Like maybe some more body/bodies...
Well, one more critiquing done, I'm going to sleep now...
If I get a chance, I'll try to look at a few more of your new ones tomorrow, or at least this week...
And just remember, I know that you like it when I do this, but it's just based on what I like, OK?
Spirit Archer
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/09/08 | Reply
@iwishiwasalive:
...Thank you for reminding me about the headband.
And thank you for pointing out Kabutos lens. I didn't notice it. e_e;
Mmhmm. You're more than welcome to voice your opinion about my pictures. I never hear what people think could have been done in them so I keep on goin'. x:
iwishiwasalive
Otakuite | Posted 04/08/08 | Reply
Wow, over 200 views. Pretty popular, if you ask me.
I'm gonna have to rate this one higher than your group pic that I just commented, for two reasons.
1. The BG is also great, but it's simpler, and doesn't distract from the main focus as much. It's great though, I love the style on it. :P
2. It's pretty emotional. Not overly emotional, like either "ZOMG, dead/dying peoples!" or "AWWWW... *Puke*" emotional, more of a milder combination of the two.
While I usually like a slightly "blurrier" or more solid-color shading/coloring, this is pretty good.
Both the pose and the clothes are great, and I especially like the bandages, and Kabuto's gloves. Oh, and did you end up working on the headband? I'm thinking that I might just make one in my metal shop, but that means that I'd have to learn a new program, which doesn't seem all that user-friendly...
Anyway, done with that randomness...
The expressions are good, but perhaps Kabuto's face coulda been either shifted down a bit on his head, or his head shaped a little differently... (For some odd reason, it reminds me of Harry's in the later Potter movies...)
And the girl's mouth should probably be a little down more, with the nose a little more protrusive/down.
Kabuto's right lens should also be a bit more see-through, at least a very pale purple coming through, and an eye outline...
The bottom right corner, though... It needs something... Like maybe some more body/bodies...
Well, one more critiquing done, I'm going to sleep now...
If I get a chance, I'll try to look at a few more of your new ones tomorrow, or at least this week...
And just remember, I know that you like it when I do this, but it's just based on what I like, OK?