I'm glad that you mentioned the lips since it was something I thought it would make her stand out more, the regular line wasn't doing it. I'm glad you like it though. And yeah, you're right I'll see if I can fix it as soon as possible.
Haha, she's gorgeous isn't she? Its really not a surprise if you fall, I was a bit amazed of how much I improved lately heh.
And yes she really deserves to be coloured, I hope I'm up to that task, heh.
On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
I'm still loving that you are sketching! She's purdy. I love her hair, but then I have a thing for hair heh. The only thing I can think, is yeah, blackwings is kind of right about the hair in the back of her head. But other than that, she's great.
Master of Kittehs (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
i like it it's very pretty :3
u wanted some constructive criticsm so here we go lol XD
1. the left eye when u look straight forward (her right eye XD) i wish it had some more detail in it, cuz i like wat u did with the right eye (her left eye)
2. for the hair u can make it look more flowly :3 but its pretty good :)
You know what I really like about this one is the mouth. Yep the mouth. I can never get the amount of indication for lips that I want without making it look wierd.
My only thought to help you improve is that your hair is a little big in back. Its giving the impression of a lager head.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
@MewMew:
I will. ^_~
The crazy bubbly shadow
MewMew
Master of Kittehs (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
awww np :3 glad to be of help ^^ yea tell me when u submit again :3 i'd love to see it ^^
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
@MewMew:
Thank you so much for your letting me know what you think I should do. Its comment like yours that truly helps an artist to get better. Thank you.
And I shall see what I can do and I'll let you know shortly after. Thank you once again. ^_^
The crazy bubbly shadow
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
@blackwings:
I'm glad that you mentioned the lips since it was something I thought it would make her stand out more, the regular line wasn't doing it. I'm glad you like it though. And yeah, you're right I'll see if I can fix it as soon as possible.
The crazy bubbly shadow
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/27/08 | Reply
@TimeChaser:
Haha, she's gorgeous isn't she? Its really not a surprise if you fall, I was a bit amazed of how much I improved lately heh.
And yes she really deserves to be coloured, I hope I'm up to that task, heh.
The crazy bubbly shadow
timbermoonkiss
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/24/08 | Reply
a new style? that's a nice picture ^^
I'd like to see some colouring, but
I guess you're trying to get a feel
for the picture? Am I right?
neway, i like this style, and im interested
in seeing some more of ur work!
.::timbermoonkiss::.
KUYZO
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/24/08 | Reply
This very amazing, very good.
Dark Phoenix
On the Jazz! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
I'm still loving that you are sketching! She's purdy. I love her hair, but then I have a thing for hair heh. The only thing I can think, is yeah, blackwings is kind of right about the hair in the back of her head. But other than that, she's great.
i luve2dance
Grand Otaku | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
WOW so luve this!! the lips and the eyes are like perfect!!
MewMew
Master of Kittehs (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
i like it it's very pretty :3
u wanted some constructive criticsm so here we go lol XD
1. the left eye when u look straight forward (her right eye XD) i wish it had some more detail in it, cuz i like wat u did with the right eye (her left eye)
2. for the hair u can make it look more flowly :3 but its pretty good :)
u should color it!! :D
~Rachel
blackwings
Lady-Blackwings (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
You know what I really like about this one is the mouth. Yep the mouth. I can never get the amount of indication for lips that I want without making it look wierd.
My only thought to help you improve is that your hair is a little big in back. Its giving the impression of a lager head.
Great work!
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/23/08 | Reply
Pretty... O_O *must not fall for 2D girl*
This is most excellent ^^ I don't think it really needs any improving, although a colored version might be nice ^^
Bazinga!