I don't think the shoulders look weird, that's what I think anyway. This is pretty though. ^^

xoxo,
Britty

@Dame X:

lolz, thanx ^__^. I guess I can be KINDA happ-eh then

@Shi Bum Bumm:

You're very welcome :D

@KungPowChicken:

Thank you KungPow! ^___^

i think its a good sketch!
:D

great job!
keep it up!

@Shi Bum Bumm:

oh i'm sure if you wanted to you could draw anything

@The Shadow Prince:

thanx ^^
The model was pretty although thin, and her dress was more sparkly and oriental than I could draw...

looks like most models.
skinny as a pencil, and superficial.
(talking about the person, the drawing is good)