Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
oh, wow! such a lovely picture. her wings look very full and fluffy! and her dress is BEAUTIFUL, hands down - the patterns are very elegant and flowing.
criticism is probably the best way to get better, so it's always good to ask. ^ ^ let's see...well, most of what i say has to do with her wings. the feathers branch out nicely, but the armlike part of the wings (aka the part that connects to the body) isn't thick enough. they should be as thick as, or if not more than, her arms. the arm part also curves out farther than just the top edge of the wing - it goes out almost to the end of the wing.
that's about all i can say on the criticism, her face may need a bit of practice, but that's all. quiz time! did you use...1) markers, 2) coloured pencils, and 3) an ink pen?
O.O w-wow...it's so pretty! I am not worthy of this dedication! I must draw something in return for you X3
But this is definantly one of your better works. The coloring, as you said, is improving. And I love the designs on her dress *_* She's very pretty and the poem is sweet.
erm, I suppose if you want critisism...um...clothing folds could be added. Proportion wise I think you're good. More accurate than I am. And maybe her back shouldn't cave in so much right after the arm. Think hourglass shape of wide (chest/upper back)- thin (waist) - wide (hips and rest of the body)
myanimeworld149
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
@MissGoldenAngel:
1:correct!
2:correct!
3: ooooooooh...nope, think waxy. :3
MissGoldenAngel
Secretly a Turnip (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/08 | Reply
oh, wow! such a lovely picture. her wings look very full and fluffy! and her dress is BEAUTIFUL, hands down - the patterns are very elegant and flowing.
criticism is probably the best way to get better, so it's always good to ask. ^ ^ let's see...well, most of what i say has to do with her wings. the feathers branch out nicely, but the armlike part of the wings (aka the part that connects to the body) isn't thick enough. they should be as thick as, or if not more than, her arms. the arm part also curves out farther than just the top edge of the wing - it goes out almost to the end of the wing.
that's about all i can say on the criticism, her face may need a bit of practice, but that's all. quiz time! did you use...1) markers, 2) coloured pencils, and 3) an ink pen?
Tamster224
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/14/08 | Reply
um crtitisum..... try drawin the wingz better. they dont look goodddddd.
Sage of Magic
Moe Foxgirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/13/08 | Reply
O.O w-wow...it's so pretty! I am not worthy of this dedication! I must draw something in return for you X3
But this is definantly one of your better works. The coloring, as you said, is improving. And I love the designs on her dress *_* She's very pretty and the poem is sweet.
erm, I suppose if you want critisism...um...clothing folds could be added. Proportion wise I think you're good. More accurate than I am. And maybe her back shouldn't cave in so much right after the arm. Think hourglass shape of wide (chest/upper back)- thin (waist) - wide (hips and rest of the body)