Im right here to make the best of comments like usual.Hummm this is gona be a hard job,no doubt of that.Well If I could pic something to start it will be the pose and the lineart.Since those elements are the soul of the picture ,I think you did a great work on them.The pose looks good,but it needs more lines to add more details to it.If you used 200 lines for this picture,I probably would used 350 for the same pic.Lines for the hair,the outfit,the skin :3 .You also need some shadows in here to give the picture a better look .I really like the colors you pick for this one.Well about the bg,you dont need to do a complicated one.Start with the basic bg and then head foward :3.Keep up the great awesome work,hope I was of help.
AngelBest Dream
Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/10/08 | Reply
Im right here to make the best of comments like usual.Hummm this is gona be a hard job,no doubt of that.Well If I could pic something to start it will be the pose and the lineart.Since those elements are the soul of the picture ,I think you did a great work on them.The pose looks good,but it needs more lines to add more details to it.If you used 200 lines for this picture,I probably would used 350 for the same pic.Lines for the hair,the outfit,the skin :3 .You also need some shadows in here to give the picture a better look .I really like the colors you pick for this one.Well about the bg,you dont need to do a complicated one.Start with the basic bg and then head foward :3.Keep up the great awesome work,hope I was of help.
Angel