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    Okitaru

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply

    i love it! just the tail seems a little... sharp but other wise its awesome ^.^

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    Hyper Mew26

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/29/08 | Reply

    It's Good!! Your Really good with shading.

    Keep it Up!!

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    somegirl

    Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/28/08 | Reply

    @stupidturtle365:

    I try to help people out with their drawings because it drives me crazy when no one gives me constructive criticism. lol I do remember one time someone got mad at me for giving it to them and they said "would you like it if someone did that to you?!" ...yes

    xD So anyway- if you ever want me to look at one of your artworks message me. I don't do the whole subscribing thing because it's overly complicated =_=;

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    stupidturtle365

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/08 | Reply

    @somegirl:

    Thank you soo much Jae! I needed someone to tell me wat was wrong... nobody would have told me. again thanks for the constructive critisizm!

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    Balalaika

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply

    amazing pic! shading is 10x better than what i could ever hope to do. :]

    -Balalaika, Carried with the Wind-

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    somegirl

    Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply

    Hey turtle, awesome drawing! i love it^-^
    You drew her hair wonderfully and your form is very good.
    Your shading on her body is perfect. I would like to see you try to get a little darker though with her hair. I think you over did a little bit with the highlights on the hair. A few are good but remember where your light source is. The hair what's below isn't going to have a highlight.

    I like to help people improve with their skills by giving them a little constructive criticism. If you're looking for that i would most likely say that her left shoulder should come down just a little bit more and curve to her body instead of angle.

    Overall i love your picture. it's wonderful! very good job^-^

    -Jae

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    Kami-chan.x3

    Bubblegum'd! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply

    That's a great sketch. I love how you shaded it. *huggles*

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    Minto

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply

    Her legs are too thin, and the fur on her tail is a bit mehh, but I think you did a very good job otherwize, and I look forward to more of your art. =]

    ~minto.