I try to help people out with their drawings because it drives me crazy when no one gives me constructive criticism. lol I do remember one time someone got mad at me for giving it to them and they said "would you like it if someone did that to you?!" ...yes
xD So anyway- if you ever want me to look at one of your artworks message me. I don't do the whole subscribing thing because it's overly complicated =_=;
Hey turtle, awesome drawing! i love it^-^
You drew her hair wonderfully and your form is very good.
Your shading on her body is perfect. I would like to see you try to get a little darker though with her hair. I think you over did a little bit with the highlights on the hair. A few are good but remember where your light source is. The hair what's below isn't going to have a highlight.
I like to help people improve with their skills by giving them a little constructive criticism. If you're looking for that i would most likely say that her left shoulder should come down just a little bit more and curve to her body instead of angle.
Overall i love your picture. it's wonderful! very good job^-^
Her legs are too thin, and the fur on her tail is a bit mehh, but I think you did a very good job otherwize, and I look forward to more of your art. =]
Okitaru
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/14/09 | Reply
i love it! just the tail seems a little... sharp but other wise its awesome ^.^
Hyper Mew26
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/29/08 | Reply
It's Good!! Your Really good with shading.
Keep it Up!!
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/28/08 | Reply
@stupidturtle365:
I try to help people out with their drawings because it drives me crazy when no one gives me constructive criticism. lol I do remember one time someone got mad at me for giving it to them and they said "would you like it if someone did that to you?!" ...yes
xD So anyway- if you ever want me to look at one of your artworks message me. I don't do the whole subscribing thing because it's overly complicated =_=;
stupidturtle365
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/27/08 | Reply
@somegirl:
Thank you soo much Jae! I needed someone to tell me wat was wrong... nobody would have told me. again thanks for the constructive critisizm!
Balalaika
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
amazing pic! shading is 10x better than what i could ever hope to do. :]
-Balalaika, Carried with the Wind-
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Hey turtle, awesome drawing! i love it^-^
You drew her hair wonderfully and your form is very good.
Your shading on her body is perfect. I would like to see you try to get a little darker though with her hair. I think you over did a little bit with the highlights on the hair. A few are good but remember where your light source is. The hair what's below isn't going to have a highlight.
I like to help people improve with their skills by giving them a little constructive criticism. If you're looking for that i would most likely say that her left shoulder should come down just a little bit more and curve to her body instead of angle.
Overall i love your picture. it's wonderful! very good job^-^
-Jae
Kami-chan.x3
Bubblegum'd! (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
That's a great sketch. I love how you shaded it. *huggles*
Minto
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
Her legs are too thin, and the fur on her tail is a bit mehh, but I think you did a very good job otherwize, and I look forward to more of your art. =]
~minto.