The pic is okay, but it would help if it wasn't taken straight from the manga. Not necessarily meaning you traced it, just that you didn't really change anything to make it your own...

no, it is'nt traced, I drew this picture and resized it, this was my first drawing that I put up when I got on this site. ^___^

good but next time don't resize it

Really nice!!

Kinda blurry because you resized it, but good. ^-^

wow! That is good