You sure are improving and you keep rising above your struggles too! You won't quit till it meets greatness and that is what makes you a superb artist, this really is a great piece, I wouldn't feel too down on it because there is wonderful details on this one I really like. I really like your choice of outfits you create for your characters and the roles you create for them. Now you have become sharper on your details so there is always a time for improvement, which you show now. Shoot you should start getting into making clothes that would be awesome. You have got quite a creative mind for fashion. You should try it, you may like it :D

This still is one of my favorite artworks from you so I'm saving it to my profile ;D I am looking forward to more of Kyousuke you should continue with his design help him grow more. You can do it =]