I Like it, very nice, one thing I would though, is I would do something more with the earbud/headphone cord and have it end up flowing into or from, depends on the motion your going for, the musical chords. Also, that ring of bubbles center bottom are just kinda hanging out, I personally don't like them hanging out like that, but I would try to balance them out with my chord idea, that's me, another artist's opinion. It looks awesome, and I can't wait to see the finished product, I love your style.
The reason it's not straight is because... well if you've seen the new ipod it's not square o.O it looks funkey xDDD
xDDD i love the little birdy!! hehe that's so funny
thanks so so so much weiss. no ididn't really know about the 5 bar thing. i felt like something was off but didn't check it.
i can't add it now though, i just submitted the final a few minutes ago
Crazy Cat Lady (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
wow this is amazing!i love the star and the heart!the ipod is really col too!and i love all the detail!great job!i cannot wait for the finishes projected as well
When I say more pronounced... I mean... The features of the profile seem slightly flat. Like... When I was looking at your picture I didn't see the female profile at first. Once I did, I could tell that it was a face... You could leave it the way it is, and it would still be a great drawing. I was just suggesting... What if you made the nose and chin stick out a little more, so the mental connection of 'Oh... That's a female profile' happened a little quicker? That was all :D
I really like this picture... Very well drawn. My only suggestion: try to make the features of the profile a little more pronounced. The average viewer might encounter some difficulty discerning the contents of the picture otherwise. Great job! Can't wait to see the finished product :D
I Am Manga
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/17/08 | Reply
I Like it, very nice, one thing I would though, is I would do something more with the earbud/headphone cord and have it end up flowing into or from, depends on the motion your going for, the musical chords. Also, that ring of bubbles center bottom are just kinda hanging out, I personally don't like them hanging out like that, but I would try to balance them out with my chord idea, that's me, another artist's opinion. It looks awesome, and I can't wait to see the finished product, I love your style.
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/17/08 | Reply
@:
The reason it's not straight is because... well if you've seen the new ipod it's not square o.O it looks funkey xDDD
xDDD i love the little birdy!! hehe that's so funny
thanks so so so much weiss. no ididn't really know about the 5 bar thing. i felt like something was off but didn't check it.
i can't add it now though, i just submitted the final a few minutes ago
-Jae
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/17/08 | Reply
@:
that's why it says draft if big huge letters at the bottom... i just posted the final <.<;;;
wolf of sorrow
JMusicGuru (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
It looks great, but I agree with Missa about the girl, she could be fixed. I didn't notice it when I opened the page.
Also, I'm interested on what creative thing you could come up with to put on the ipod screen. It's a blank screen that needs something cool, lol.
Otherwise, it looks great. ^^
Missa8305
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@somegirl:
LOL! That's cool. Don't worry about it :D (I know that sometimes I can be very confusing.)
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@Missa8305:
oh alright^-^ thanks, i just didn't understand what you meant lol
IchigoShirayuki
Crazy Cat Lady (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
wow this is amazing!i love the star and the heart!the ipod is really col too!and i love all the detail!great job!i cannot wait for the finishes projected as well
Missa8305
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@somegirl:
When I say more pronounced... I mean... The features of the profile seem slightly flat. Like... When I was looking at your picture I didn't see the female profile at first. Once I did, I could tell that it was a face... You could leave it the way it is, and it would still be a great drawing. I was just suggesting... What if you made the nose and chin stick out a little more, so the mental connection of 'Oh... That's a female profile' happened a little quicker? That was all :D
zero guardian
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
AWESOME SAUCE!!!
I klove this one Jae, great work on this
I cant wait to see it colored, if you are coloring it
Zerofma17
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
this is soo cool, just like all of your pics! they r awesome! the new ipods look pretty cool! great job as always, have an awesome day!
fma17
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@Missa8305:
You lost me misa^^;;;;
what do you mean more pronounced?
Missa8305
Senior Otaku | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
I really like this picture... Very well drawn. My only suggestion: try to make the features of the profile a little more pronounced. The average viewer might encounter some difficulty discerning the contents of the picture otherwise. Great job! Can't wait to see the finished product :D